My pink whispering
My pink whispering
is a smear -
a delicate underwater symphony
black and white
shadow goddess
smooth as honey.
True beauty is sad,
red still -
You always eat
gorgeous love,
a thousand essential
screams a day.
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Comments
'a thousand essential screams a day.' that line is giving me goosebumps.
surfed here from Rhian's comments. This is my first ride on the poetry train: http://joystory.blogspot.com/2007/05/monday-poetry-train-1.html
Posted by: Joy Renee | May 28, 2007 4:44 PM
oooooh - nice! i liked this alot:
"black and white
shadow goddess
smooth as honey."
Posted by: rhian | May 28, 2007 8:41 AM
Christine that was gorgeous. Sensual and smooth. I got goosebumps reading it!!! WONDERFUL SWEETIE! Don't make us wait too much for more. =)
Posted by: red | May 25, 2007 6:08 PM
That's graceful and beautiful and so powerful. Thank you, Christine, for posting it!
Posted by: Robin L. Rotham | May 24, 2007 8:16 PM
Wow, wow, wow! I'm going to need a cold shower after that one -- what a beautiful and sensual and powerful poem! I love the images you paint and the feelings you evoke with your words.
Posted by: Thomma Lyn | May 24, 2007 1:05 PM